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Re: (TFT) Jay's writing style.

I sort of wonder if he's got some kind of actual mental issues going that prevent him from writing coherent paragraphs. He seems to know what good writing style is, and that he's not following it. Also, it seems to be getting worse over time. So my theory is that he's got, like, a tumor in his brain's copy-editing center. But then again, maybe I've just watched too many episodes of House M.D...

- Meg

On 8/25/15 9:48 PM, Rick Smith wrote:
Hi Jeffrey,
   Years ago I pointed out to Jay that good writing practices would make
his stuff much easier to read.  I got a set of broken sentences in reply
which, I believe, boiled down to "I don't care".

   I've skipped every post Jay has written since.

   If anyone were to go thru the TFT archives, clean them up and index
them, I believe that Jay's posts could be deleted with out losing any
thing of value.  I think that they significantly lower the value of this site.

   Warm regards, Rick.

On 2015-08-25, at 7:45 PM, Jeffrey Vandine wrote:

Another wall of text and run-on sentences.

      From: Jay Carlisle <maou.tsaou@gmail.com>
To: "tft@brainiac.com" <tft@brainiac.com>
Sent: Tuesday, August 25, 2015 5:30 PM
Subject: Re: (TFT) new development Heroes and Other Worlds. interesting port of Mel/Wiz

Wow Jay... Your trickle of cluelessness attempts at communication
could do with a few of muster Marks quarks and some STOP IT dude.
I know, I know... You never wanted to write in the first place but You
are writing aren't You? And You've been doing so good keeping Your...
whatever it is You do in place of writing out of Your production but
try firing off an e-mail and THERE'S JAY, ranting like a lunatic and
generally flashing His mental junk in readers faces who'd be less
scared by a straight Richard pic of His pecker than the prattle
piddling on the page His porno prose amounts too... pervert.

On Tue, Aug 25, 2015 at 5:17 PM, Jay Carlisle <maou.tsaou@gmail.com> wrote:
If You make money You will be sued for everything under the sun
including trademark, copyright, corrupting the youth and impiety while
You can do all of that and use toxic inks to print on
non-biodegradable paper made from Santa's wiskers and Angle kisses in
a process that kills the Angels and causes Santa to HATE children and
it's no big whoop because, hey. No money. I learned to quit worrying
and learned to setup say a pirate software holding that puts slim XP
on >$20 "smart" stick computers, Android devices sans touch screens to
add "smart tv" functionality to not smart tv's (aka all tv's internet
conn or no) which I can distribute at half the cost of the crap the
big three are pulling with A title offerings nerfed to hell for micro
transaction and DLC bleeding of the customer base using funds formally
used to research the markets to psych-study how to manipulate and
build actuarial tables so as to cause most Players to run out of ammo
just as the Boss battle is starting but for $2 each they can get more
clips... Too far especially when ea sets up in MY hometown so with
much hoopla and fanfair undercut their garbage and deliver it on a
"computer" to boot as the goal is not to make a thin red dime of that
kind of "profit" rather it's to goad the stupid legal bullies into
actually following through on their threats and using every bit of
funds to tie up, impede, drag out, raise expense and generally keep
their expensive bullies bound up with BS and tied up on this stupidity
rather than their usual modus operandi of threats and intimidation to
get a goal accomplished regardless of the legal rightness or wrongness
of said goal. Quite frankly totalatarian business only bothers with
the rules that suit them and the vast majority of family fortunes were
initially started with profits from illegal practices like the
Godfather family who moved into international banking in The Last Don.
Start up's want fair competition while successful companies quash such
naive notions. Anyone bother to look at iminate domaine lately? There
is none because there's next to no profit in selling material
available in free form to the general public and so it was destroyed
(contrary to denials that it's only suspended it's like a toll bridge
fee that was supposed to expire in some distant future but never
did... I'll believe it when I see it and could care less about kool
aid drinkers blather about BS claiming what will happen later
especially when the source is a worthless facade of a government that
has lied and made unsubstantiated claims on practically every major
issue this century. No steel means no proof on 9/11 PERIOD. Computer
models and a panel of experts is proof of diddly squat and any idiot
who claims otherwise because they "saw it on television" is too stupid
to be classified as a human being. I SAW David Copperfield disappear
the statue of liberty on tv... no WMD's, no charges on Ossama for 9/11
and no body for the BS claim that the man was killed in some supposed
raid most people cheered because they thought the man brought steel
framed skyscrapers down with aluminum planes. American's, stupidest
people on the face of the Planet which just means We couldn't get
Gumped off the short bus like the rest... Breakfast of Champions has
some REALLY negative long term effects and the kicker is stuff like
american football becoming scripted passion play like WWE wrestling
and no longer even a sport... and Jenner's double whammy of Wheaties
box and prog rock keyboardest gender switch lacking the musicianship
but replacing that with a LOT of PR and yelling about it like Dr
Richards didn't. That's a real Richard move ther Jenner and why I lack
sympathy You demand for... nothing. A Faulkneresque little girl up a
tree with her underpants showing... the passing away of the u.s. in
wake of the united corporations of... wherever the business situation
happens to be most advantageous actually. A specific region or group
of people is meaningless to multinationals who seem primed to try
establishing meta-courts above national and regional authorities
towards those ends... annnnnd I'm probably making a bit more of it
than is warranted owing to My advanced age and the general
disillusionment that comes from finding the Wizard is a snake oil
salesman involved in hiding behind the same curtain of sound and fury
that all the rest use to pretend they actually DO know what they are
doing and have everything under control but the CoC always ends up at
some guy wearing a bear laxative hat who has the only line to the
"head guy" who lives above the clouds... "trust me". Sorry
authorities, I'm all out. Have some spite and massive quantities of
distrust instead. Guilty untill proven innocent is a much better
approach these days and that's not cynical when the gov establishes
its right to lie as protected free speech... but You best not lie to
the government as that ain't free speech and piss on Your right to not
incriminate Yourself. Which is a roundabout way of getting to My point
that copyright is Snark hunting or like trying to earn the rent at a
Vegas Casino which is a failure to either hitch the horse to the carts
front much less notice the cart lacks wheels... If You've something to
"copyright" then IMHO I'd just note that the current situation is
unlikely to hold going much further forward unless the
institutionalized corruption manages to hold in which case copyright
is WAY down the list of concerns and it might be better to take a
broader look at what a economic climate without the fiat petrol dollar
reserve domination might be like. I may in essence live in a van down
by the river but I know a change is gonna come... yes it will. Albert
Barnes thought he had a "trust" but it turned out not. Pew that stinks
but it ought to inform folks of just how much protection is in words
when the bullet hits the bone. Copyright... why do You think the good
lord made Your eyes? To Lehar? Legal systems are to be manipulated not
mindlessly obeyed because legal systems are corrupt at the very core
and slavishly following every jot and tittle of tort won't save Your
"trust" when a milkshake drinker family desires what You have. Talk to
an assassian if You really need affect or something along similar
unaffiliated lines from the puppet masters strings as the law will not
help You regardless. As a matter of fact I'm gonna go plagiarize some
stuff verbatim and put it on the web because I can and this has made
Me feel like it... not like I don't adapt/steal everything I do but I
bother to change it up and rub My stink on it enough that others don't
usually wanna claim it after I'm through with it but being the petty
bastard I am I still bother sharing hundreds of Kindle Mobi titles
after amazon screwed up My prime orders because I may be petty and
pathetic but I don't let such mistreatment just pass. Too few tit for
tat practitioners makes for more and more unpenalized corruption
because if they get away with murder why wouldn't they try genocide?
Afraid of all the apathy and football watching such a escalation might
spark from the public? There's nothing like villagers never forming an
angry mob to keep mad men from their harmful schemes. Everything all
just works out well in the end... till it doesn't.
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